Comments on: Master Plotto Week Two Winner: Ian Bassingthwaighte http://www.tinhouse.com/blog/14666/master-plotto-week-two-winner-ian-bassingthwaighte.html Home of the magazine, the books, and the conference Fri, 17 May 2013 19:59:32 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.4.2 By: Richard Osgood http://www.tinhouse.com/blog/14666/master-plotto-week-two-winner-ian-bassingthwaighte.html#comment-7639 Richard Osgood Wed, 18 Apr 2012 21:42:07 +0000 http://www.tinhouse.com/blog/?p=14666#comment-7639 Well done, Ian. I like the structure of this piece, in particular the use of a colonized (er, colon-ized) sentence to open some of the paragraphs. It creates an intriguing mix of cadence and proportion that would otherwise be absent in "linear" prose (in this particular story). The content is engaging and the voice consistent. Please consider joining us in the Flash Factory on Zoetrope where we workshop compressed fiction in a productive and supportive environment. If this interests you, just look me up and I'll get you in. Best, R. Well done, Ian. I like the structure of this piece, in particular the use of a colonized (er, colon-ized) sentence to open some of the paragraphs. It creates an intriguing mix of cadence and proportion that would otherwise be absent in “linear” prose (in this particular story). The content is engaging and the voice consistent. Please consider joining us in the Flash Factory on Zoetrope where we workshop compressed fiction in a productive and supportive environment. If this interests you, just look me up and I’ll get you in.

Best,
R.

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